Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Capital
punishments
are final
punishments
or
sentences
given to
criminals
. They include death
sentence
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either by hanging, firing squad, hanging,
life
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sentences
with no parole. I am of the opinion that capital
punishments
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should be reserved for grievous or very serious crimes
such
as
first degree
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murder, manslaughter,
rape
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.
However
, in a law
court
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it is usually up to the judge and the jury to determine how grievous a
crime
is and the punishment
that is
deserving. The intent of the criminal and facts of the case may be misconstrued and an innocent person may be wrongfully sent to jail suffering a capital punishment for
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not committed. It is in cases like
this
that others are of the opinion that capital
punishments
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be ruled out.
This
is to avoid mistakes which can be irrevocable following possible loss of lives. Some persons advocate that
sentences
should strictly be given at the discretion of the judge. They believe that there are circumstances that
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an individual to commit a
crime
. They
also
believe that
while
serving their
sentences
, these
criminals
could become reformed and get a second chance at life. There are lots of rehabilitative measures and activities in prisons that offer options to these
criminals
. The religious sect would
also
quote the scriptures talking about forgiveness and repentance and explaining why taking a life for another may not be the best option. Better still, those who were wrongly accused could get a fair chance at re-trial.
This
opportunity could be lost if capital
punishments
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enforced. These points may be convincing to some but not me. It is my opinion that we all have a choice to make regardless of our circumstances and we are responsible for our actions. I think someone who commits manslaughter
for example
was deliberate in action to end the lives of people and should experience the full weight of the law which in
this
case is capital punishment.
This
will serve as a warning to all citizens they are liable. Another angle to
this
is that some of these
criminals
if given lighter
sentences
get into prison and become worse than what they were. there have been stories of those who organised revenge killings
while
in prison. absolute lack of remorse and failure to apply themselves in rehabilitative measures. Others recruit "smaller"
criminals
and make them masterminds of
crime
. Society just might be doing itself a
favor
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by eliminating these
criminals
with capital
punishments
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. Have you had someone close to you a relative, friend or family member as a victim of any of these serious crimes? Your ability to be all forgiving would not come into play at
such
a time.The grief could be so disastrous. Some persons never recover from
such
losses. Capital
punishments
are here to stay and
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fully support the motion.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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