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Some believe that people are naturally born leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The pie chart illustrates the rates of destination of university
graduate
student
 in anthropology right after they are graduated, while the additional table compares the salaries of the three types of anthropologists employees who already worked for five years. Overall, the full-time worker became one of the biggest interest fields that the
graduate
 anthropology
student
 wanted to be involved, while the part-time work-post study became the lowest field of interest
by
Suggestion
of
 the
student
. After five years of working, the government sector became the highest salary types of employment for an
anthropologist
. The full-time work field accounted for 52% of the
anthropologist
student
 in one university which is taking the biggest part of the destination for the
anthropologist
graduate
student
 to start a carrier.
Also
, followed by part-time work at 15 %, unemployed at 12% and full-time postgraduate study and not known, which are 8% each.
Likewise
, the lowest field of destination for a fresh
graduate
student
 is part-time work and postgraduate study, which is only for 5%
student
 in the whole university. Turning to, the salaries of
anthropologist
Suggestion
the anthropologist
anthropologists
 that worked for five years in freelance consulting accounted for 40 % for the amounts of 75,000-99,999 and 100,000 or more while the
range
 of 25,000-49,999 only took 15 % of the
employee
 and the
range
 of 25,00-49,999 took the smallest rates of the
employee
, which is only for 5%. In the other hand, 50 % of the Government sector
employee
 received 100,000 or more for the salaries, while only 5 % to get the
range
 25,000-49,999.
Finally
, the private company can afford 35% of their
employee
 to getting 50,00-74,999
range
 of salary, while only 10% of them can get 50,00-74,999.
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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