Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well‐educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
The SOCIALIST REPUBLIC OF VIETNAM
Independence - Freedom - Happiness
Ho Chi Minh City, June 26, 2020
Dear:
Hutech
International Training Institute of Ho Chi Minh City University of Technology (HUTECH)
On June 3, 2020, I sent a letter
to the Institute to inform about Dr. Kieu
Anh Tai's decision related to guiding the dissertation of the Master of Tourism and Hospitality Management program (Master of Hospitality). Arts in Hospitality and Tourism Industry Management [MA-HTIM]).
On June 22, 2020, I received an email
from Dr. Pham Thi Hai Quynh - Director of Hutech International Training Institute. In the letter
, the President informed about the shortcomings and limitations of the graduation
thesis including
: (i) The unmodified Literature review at the request of Bangkok University Council (Accept comma addition
thesis, including
BU
); (ii) Not conforming to the standard of presenting the final thesis
of BU
(with a set form); (iii) Plagiarism. In addition
, the Director also
asked me to clearly explain the delay in submitting the revised article as prescribed by BU
.
Now, I would like to present the following:
1. About the shortcomings and limitations mentioned in the email
On November 23, 2019, I participated in defense
of my graduate (military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies
defence
thesis
.
On December 16, 2019, the Institute announced the results of the thesis
defense
.
(i) Content - Part of the Literature review has not been modified at the request of Bangkok University Council ((military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies
defence
BU
)
On December 28, 2019, I sent an email
to the instructor. In the letter
, I have listed the comment notes and comments of
the Suggestion
on
Graduation
Defense
Council for lecturers to know and give additional comments (if any - Suggestion
Defence
email
attached). However
, the instructor's responses did not clearly answer whether the above lists had recorded fully, omitted, or correctly commented, commented, or not. Therefore
, in the process of editing the dissertation, I still base on the comments of the Council that I have recorded as well as corrected by additional comments of GVHD (the drafted edits and opinions of the GVHD were sent to the Institute with the letter
dated June 3, 2020).
Because the discussion was to mainly revise the thesis
via test email
, I certainly could not absorb the exact requirements of the research. I am always looking forward and ready to complete my graduation
thesis
as required.
(ii) Form - Not in line with the standard presenting the graduation
thesis
of BU
(with the prescribed form)
At the time of defending the graduation
thesis
- November 23, 2019, the Council did not require editing of the presentation format of the graduation
thesis
. In addition
, I have not received any other comments on the specific standards that need to be revised. Therefore
, in the process of editing the dissertation, I still subjectively keep the graduation
thesis
presentation form until now.
I always look forward to pointing out things that are not in line with the standards to correct the final thesis
.
(iii) Plagiarism
Plagiarism is a serious problem related to scientific ethics. I am always aware of how not to violate this
behavior
. manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
Therefore
, I recommend that the Institute verify the allegations and point out the plagiarism violations in my graduation
essays.
2. Explanation of deadline for submission of corrected
submissions
At 06:30, April 7, 2020, I sent an Suggestion
correcting
email
to the Program Manager, asking for the correction and progress of submitting the graduation
thesis
(email
attached).
By 11:26, on 07/
04/
2020, I have received an email
from the Institute asking to submit the graduation
thesis
to consider graduating as soon as possible (because BU
considered graduating in batches in the year) (email
attached).
Until now, I have not received notice of the next
deadline to submit papers.
Above are my comments and explanations, as requested from the Institute at
Suggestion
by
email
06/
22/
2020. I hope that the Institute will consider, guide, and resolve to help me complete the procedure to be granted a "Master of Arts in Hospitality and Tourism Industry Management" by Bangkok University.
Sincerely, thank the Institute for interest and support in the past and look forward to timely resolution.
Best regards,
Nguyen Thi Hong DiemSubmitted by Phúc Hoàng Gia on
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