Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well‐educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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The SOCIALIST REPUBLIC OF VIETNAM Independence - Freedom - Happiness Ho Chi Minh City, June 26, 2020 Dear:
Hutech
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International Training Institute of Ho Chi Minh City University of Technology (HUTECH) On June 3, 2020, I sent a
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to the Institute to inform about Dr.
Kieu
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Anh Tai's decision related to guiding the dissertation of the Master of Tourism and Hospitality Management program (Master of Hospitality). Arts in Hospitality and Tourism Industry Management [MA-HTIM]). On June 22, 2020, I received an
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from Dr. Pham Thi Hai Quynh - Director of Hutech International Training Institute. In the
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, the President informed about the shortcomings and limitations of the
graduation
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thesis including
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thesis, including
: (i) The unmodified Literature review at the request of Bangkok University Council (
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); (ii) Not conforming to the standard of presenting the final
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of
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(with a set form); (iii) Plagiarism.
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, the Director
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asked me to clearly explain the delay in submitting the revised article as prescribed by
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. Now, I would like to present the following: 1. About the shortcomings and limitations mentioned in the
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On November 23, 2019, I participated in
defense
(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies
defence
of my graduate
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. On December 16, 2019, the Institute announced the results of the
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defense
(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies
defence
. (i) Content - Part of the Literature review has not been modified at the request of Bangkok University Council (
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) On December 28, 2019, I sent an
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to the instructor. In the
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, I have listed the comment notes and comments
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Defense
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Council for lecturers to know and give additional comments (if any -
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attached).
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, the instructor's responses did not clearly answer whether the above lists had recorded fully, omitted, or correctly commented, commented, or not.
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, in the process of editing the dissertation, I still base on the comments of the Council that I have recorded as well as corrected by additional comments of GVHD (the drafted edits and opinions of the GVHD were sent to the Institute with the
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dated June 3, 2020). Because the discussion was to mainly revise the
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via test
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, I certainly could not absorb the exact requirements of the research. I am always looking forward and ready to complete my
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as required. (ii) Form - Not in line with the standard presenting the
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of
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(with the prescribed form) At the time of defending the
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thesis
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- November 23, 2019, the Council did not require editing of the presentation format of the
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thesis
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.
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, I have not received any other comments on the specific standards that need to be revised.
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, in the process of editing the dissertation, I still subjectively keep the
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presentation form until now. I always look forward to pointing out things that are not in line with the standards to correct the final
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. (iii) Plagiarism Plagiarism is a serious problem related to scientific ethics. I am always aware of how not to violate
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behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
.
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, I recommend that the Institute verify the allegations and point out the plagiarism violations in my
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essays. 2. Explanation of deadline for submission of
corrected
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correcting
submissions At 06:30, April 7, 2020, I sent an
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to the Program Manager, asking for the correction and progress of submitting the
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(
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attached). By 11:26, on 07
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04
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2020, I have received an
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from the Institute asking to submit the
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thesis
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to consider graduating as soon as possible (because
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considered graduating in batches in the year) (
email
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attached). Until now, I have not received notice of the
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deadline to submit papers. Above are my comments and explanations, as requested from the Institute
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06
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22
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2020. I hope that the Institute will consider, guide, and resolve to help me complete the procedure to be granted a "Master of Arts in Hospitality and Tourism Industry Management" by Bangkok University. Sincerely, thank the Institute for interest and support in the past and look forward to timely resolution. Best regards, Nguyen Thi Hong Diem
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Educational tool
  • Documentaries
  • Passive consumption
  • Critical thinking
  • Imagination
  • Attention span
  • Literacy skills
  • Screen time
  • Parental guidance
  • Digital materials
  • Interactive learning
  • Multimedia resources
  • Cognitive development
  • Reading comprehension
  • Balanced approach
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