Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?
Nowadays, with the economic evolution,
entertainment field
has become one of the most paid fields (in the worldAccept comma addition
entertainment, field
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in comparisonUse synonyms
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in the industry). Indeed, some people believe that less Use synonyms
money
must be paid to the entertainers. From my point of view, I totallyUse synonyms
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absolutely agree that famous entertainers are gaining undeserved wealth.
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First
of all, too much Linking Words
money
is being spent on inappropriate activities. In many countries, wealth is lost on entertainment while people are starving. Use synonyms
For example
, In Brazil, football players receive a Linking Words
high
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higher
salary which
reaches millions (currency? USD/$), whereas the country is facing educational, financial and medical problems. Accept comma addition
salary, which
Besides
, newspapers have shown many cases that film stars, pop musicians or sports stars have Linking Words
problem
with paying their taxes. Suggestion
a problem
problems
Hence
, entertainers take much Linking Words
money
, fame, and people’s Use synonyms
love but
they do not return anything back.
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love, but
Secondly
, surging entertainers’ salary can assign the entertainers as a role model in the community. The new generation will have Linking Words
misunderstanding
about the real role models. Teenagers may assimilate that being in the entertainment field is the most Suggestion
misunderstood
honorable
thing to accomplish. not disposed to cheat or defraud; not deceptive or fraudulent
honourable
However
, Linking Words
that is
not true at all. In every civilization, doctors, engineers, teachers, scholars and soldiers deserve to be paid much Linking Words
money
than others. These people who build the country by saving people's lives, providing infrastructure, teaching the children, searching for solutions and protecting the country from the enemyUse synonyms
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defence.
To conclude, I believe that entertainers’ wageUse synonyms
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remuneration concept has to be rejuvenated. Less Use synonyms
money
should be allocated to them. Many financial issues can be mitigated if everyone takes what he truly deserves. Pay should be given to people who are improving and developing (contributing to the development) the county.Use synonyms
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