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Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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These days advertising tries to
leads
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lead
 people to consumerism and in some cases, people buy objects they do not need. While these trends increase annual product sales. Despite some disadvantages associated with
this
 industry, I believe its benefits are overweight. On the one
hand of
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hand, of
 the argument some individuals argue, advertisement companies affect people unconscious and make the illusion of need in their mind via adding subliminal messages to the adverts,
therefore
, convince customers to buy a product which they do not need. The best example of these tricks belongs to mobile manufacturers, as we can see at the beginning of each year companies like the iPhone and Samsung introduce a new high tech phone at the same time there is a long queue of people to buy these state of art mobiles.
In other words
, they encourage people in a way that if they refused to buy they would regret it.
On the other hand
, some people believe that advertising is not always harmful;
however
: they just provide some critical information about facilities of products and improve the awareness of people about a variety of objects
as a result
 of
this
 action it would be easier for people to compare several counterparts due to choosing their favorite ones more accurately
furthermore
, updating some belonging is not always means the consumerism because often the latest versions of products are more energy savor or much more eco friendly so by replacing them not only do people have the newest design but
also
 they save apart of energy cost. To sum up, advertisements might have some
drawbacks but
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drawbacks, but
 it depends on people's overview and if we used them in the right way they would be beneficial.
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