A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

A
materialistic
representing what is real; not abstract or ideal
naturalistic
approach is dominant in our
society
these days. An individual is considered as a respectable person if he/she maintain him/herself with a current fashion with fancy and expensive items of use.
On the other hand
, people who do not keep themselves with the pace of the current situation and stick with the old moral values,
this
world do not value them. I believe it is a dilemma of our
society
and it is a right of
everyone
to be treated equally regardless of any social status. Having a good fashion sense and keep yourself up to date is one of the highly endorsed inter-
personnel
a short newspaper article about a particular person or group
personal
skill
that is
always appreciated everywhere. But
everyone
cannot afford
this
as we have different social classes in our
society
with their different
life styles
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyles
. Some people prefer to
spent
Suggestion
spend
most of their money on their personal belongings
for example
expensive fancy clothes, current model car, latest model mobile phones etc.
because
Suggestion
Because
they think these things are their status symbol which allow people to consider them more respectable.
However
, in a lower class
society people
Accept comma addition
society, people
work to earn money in order to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
their basic living requirements
for example
food, utility bills and education.
Therefore
, it is very unethical to pay respect those people only who are rich and belongs to the upper class.
Similarly
, if we look back
few decades
Suggestion
a few decades
ago, people do not much concern about the social status and meet
everyone
with same respect and
honor
bestow honor or rewards upon
honour
. It shows the ethical values of a person and a family. It harmonizes the social culture of the
society
and bring people
close
Suggestion
closer
to each other. By treating
everyone
with same manner and kindness enhance the humanity among each other which is badly needed in today’s world. In conclusion, I would say for a healthy community it is necessary to establish values based on ethical culture since childhood and emphasize every individual to follow them regardless of social culture.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social status
  • Material possessions
  • Old-fashioned values
  • Honour
  • Kindness
  • Trust
  • Judged
  • Importance
  • Traditional
  • Reflection
  • Achievements
  • Hard work
  • Disregarded
  • Well-balanced
  • Meaningful
  • Cultural norms
  • Societal norms
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