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More and more newspapers and news channels are using photographs to support their news articles and stories. Some people think that photographs are not a reliable source of news while others consider photographs to be irrefutable. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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In the contemporary world, People have an opportunity to access the internet and keen to congregate data. The newspaper publishes
information
 along with photographs because it will be
understood rapidly
Suggestion
rapidly understood
.
Nevertheless
, the photograph should be explained with detailed
information
otherwise
, it will not be communicated
completedly
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
.
For example
, there are some social networking sites
such
 as Facebook, Twitter and Whatsapp are trying to publish news with photographs merely predominantly.It is a huge possibility among people.
currently
Suggestion
Currently
, people have been spreading COVID 19  related
information
 through social sites and applications. Sometimes, It might be shared as stickers alone. According to my opinion, The news should be published as detailed
information
 harmonize with photographs. It will be exaggerated
to
Suggestion
in
 people. It could have stored in their mind for a long time. It will be more powerful in society. It shows wide changes in human life as well. It is the best communicating method to reach people. In conclusion, I suggest that people those share
information
 about any news should be released with photographs as well.
Otherwise
, It will not be reached all over the people. Indeed, It is the best communication method.
Submitted by Kani Mozhi on

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