• Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. • Why is this? • What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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heart

disease. Smokers are twice as likely to have a

heart

attack than non-smokers. When smoking for a long time, it will damage

blood

vessel walls. Because some substances in

tabaco

leaves of the tobacco plant dried and prepared for smoking or ingestion

tobacco

make bad cholesterol

to stick

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the walls of arteries

Accept space

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to the formation of atherosclerotic plaques, which narrows and clogs

blood

vessels. When the

blood

vessel is narrowed, it is the cause of angina pectoris,

heart

attack or stroke.

In addition

, the carbon oxides in cigarette smoke reduce oxygen levels in the

blood

, so the

heart

must beat faster to get enough oxygen to supply the body. And the nicotine in

tabaco

leaves of the tobacco plant dried and prepared for smoking or ingestion

tobacco

also

stimulates the body to produce adrenaline, which make the

heart

beat faster.

This

cause

blood

pressure to rise, making it easier for

blood

clots to form.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

144 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Renewable energy
Subsidies
Tax credits
Photovoltaic cells
Efficiency
Off-grid
Carbon footprint
Climate change
Initial investment
Energy security
Sustainability
Decarbonization
Grid parity
Feed-in tariff
Energy storage systems
Payback period
Net metering
Silicon panels

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