Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other type of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer from your own knowledge or experience.

It is an argument that the developed countries often give financial

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help to

developing countries.

However

,

this

type of help is

unuseful

for those countries and they need to get

anther

any of various alternatives; some other

another

way

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to

help. I am highly

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recommending

the opinion by giving developing countries any other help rather than financial assist. In

this

essay, I will discuss both

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points

of views and support my own

opinin

a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty

opinion

opinions

as well. On one hand, when rich countries decided to help poorer countries by only give them financial help,

this

will not

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end

their problem. As,

this

type of help is literally

temproray

not permanent; not lasting

temporary

solution for their problems it might help short-term problems only.

Moreover

,

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,

the developing countries will stay forever depended on the developed countries, so they will not be able to upgrade and improve their countries.

This

will

also

lead to make developing countries under control from rich countries as well.A typical example

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of

that could be applied

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to

African region

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the African region

,

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,

those countries

are still depended

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still depend

on

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developing

countries

such

as Unites States AND

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UK

.

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Despite

of,

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quantifier; used with either mass or count nouns to indicate the whole number or amount of or every one of a class

all

the

financail

involving financial matters

financial

help they got from several countries still African countries

suffereing

a state of acute pain

suffering

from starvation problems.

In contrast

, If rich countries try to use different type of help,

may be

by chance

maybe

it will lead to different results. On of the useful way

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is improving

improves

the education system for developing countries,

this

approach will have a positive impacts and

influnce

a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc

influence

influences

to improve and development the poorer countries. It is proven that, country without

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educating

individuals will never

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improve

improved

, as it is an essential factor for improving.

For example

, sending

schoolership

financial aid provided to a student on the basis of academic merit

scholarship

candidates to developed countries will eventually lead to

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greater

positive impacts for poorer countries. To sum up, giving financial assist is only

temperory

not permanent; not lasting

temporary

solution for poorer countries.

Therefore

, it is

good idea

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a good idea

to help poorer countries to solve their problems in order to develop and improve their countries. ."

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Give

a man a fish and you feed him for a day; teach a man to fish and you feed him for a lifetime"