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One of the most controversial issues today relates to the migration to urban areas in search of a better future. Many people think that
life
 in the
city
 is more and more convenient nowadays, while others strongly believe that living in the
city
 will meet plenty of obstacles. From my perspective, people living in
megapolises
 could face various challenges. In the following paragraphs,
this
 essay intends to delve into both conflicting sides.
To begin
 with, there is no denying that numerous people are attracted by
city
life
 because of its benefits and attraction. It is true that there are multiple qualified educational institutions in the
city
,
thus
, thousands of students prefer studying in the
city
.
Moreover
, living in the
city
 provides a huge amount of job satisfaction and a great income that the primary reason why several fresh graduates intend to live in a big
city
.
Entertainings
Suggestion
Entertaining
Entertains
,
last
 but not least,
are
Suggestion
is
 one of the main fascinations of
city
life
 because there are several amusement parks, pubs, bars, movie
theaters
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatres
, and scored of entertaining places. Urban
life
,
however
, creates an abundance of dilemmas. Take traffic congestion as an example, overpopulation in metropolises triggers an enormous burden on infrastructure at peak hour that put residents under a mass of strain. Another point worth noting is migrants have to deal with the lack of necessities
such
 as electricity and clean water due to living in
rundown-neighborhood
Suggestion
the rundown - neighbourhood
rundown - neighbourhood
.
Besides
, the high living expense is
also
 a difficulty of low-income
migrators
. Owning to the lack of appropriate qualifications, people moving from rural areas can not look for decent careers,
thus
, they have to work as blue-collar workers,
consequently
, they
can not
can not
cannot
 afford expensive living costs due to the low income. In conclusion, from the
afore-mentioned
being the one previously mentioned or spoken of
aforementioned
 discussed,
this
 issue has both benefits and drawbacks.
Thus
, authorities should pose measures to solve these problems.
Pesonally
Suggestion
Personally
, I totally agree with the idea that people will face a variety of difficulties if they move to urban areas.
Submitted by Nga La on

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