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Some people believe that visitors to others countries should follow local customs and behavior. Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. ▪️Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Some individuals are of the opinion that the foreign tourists ought to adopt the local cultures and etiquette, while others believe that the host nation should appreciate and welcome the cultural diversities. In my opinion,
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 following the local values and norms by visitors would add a valuable experience in their life and it would
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 avoid cultural clashes,
country
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 of destination ought to be flexible with regard to foreign way of life due to its economic growth. On the one hand, the
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 groups who opine that tourists should respect local
cultural
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cultures
 believe that it will be a great opportunity for visitors to adventure various traditional cuisines, music, and customs. They will enjoy a unique insight in consequence of choosing to follow the native customs and traditions during their stay.
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, in
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 view bringing new cultures and
behaviors
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 to one
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 by visitors can make a serious threaten for their cultures.
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, they believe that locals may be interested in other
countries cultures
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countries, cultures
 when tourists come to their
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country
 and by
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 way, they forget the values of their local customs.
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, the
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 groups of people believe that the host
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 should accept and understand the different backgrounds of tourists. When visitors are welcomed warmly, they not only feel at home, but
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 appreciate the hospitality of the locals.
Travelers
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Travellers
 often prefer going to place which accept diverse
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cultures, so
 they suggest
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 destinations to other
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
 by giving positive reviews.
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, in turn, will boost the economy of the nation due to flourishing travel industry. For the economic benefit, countries should receive visitors from diverse cultures warmly.
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, in my view, visitors should make a basic effort to adapt their behavior in a way that does not conflict with local customs in a foreign
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 to make their stay more enjoyable for themselves and locals,
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,
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 might not always be possible or desirable for them, so there are times when host
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 should accept diverse cultures in order to achieve a flourishing economy. In conclusion,
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 people’s views may vary, I believe that it could be beneficial for both
travelers
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 by getting exposed to different cultures and
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 tourist destinations should be opened to the cultural diversity of its newcomers.
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