The internet has dramatically atlered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinion on this? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

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In
this
modern world,
Internet
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the Internet
plays
vital role
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a vital role
and there is no doubt that it has changed the lives of the people in
last few years
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the last few years
. Some
believes
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believe
this
changes
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change
are
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is
was
negative but
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negative, but
on the other
hand some
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hand, some
argue it has more positive sides. In my
opinion
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opinion, this
this
technology
have
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has
more positive effects in our lives and
reasons
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the reasons
for my support are given below.
To begin
with,
Internet
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the Internet
had made the communication easy.
For instance
a person can do
vedio
the visible part of a television transmission
video
call to his/her family and friends no matter where they
lives
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live
.
What
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What's
more, is that people can do online chat and even but their status and video live which
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
can see.
Secondly
, it has
also
made the work from home easy.
For instance
, due to
covid
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curved
covered
-19 many people has started doing their office work from
home which
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home, which
is possible only due to facility of
internet
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the internet
.
In addition
, online classes of children were
started
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starting
to taken by teachers in
India which
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India, which
proven
internet
has boon for them.
On the other hand
, Some
says
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say
that it had
dentrimentaled
the lives of people. For
this
they put
this arguments
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this argument
these arguments
forward that due to easy
excess
the right to enter
access
to
internet
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the internet
and all contents are easily available to everyone it is hard to protect the children from being affected by it. For illustration, children are more prone to violent content
,
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,
pornography and
this
in turn ruin their career.
Moreover
, Nowadays, youngsters are more prone to online chats on
facebook
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Facebook
and other social websites which had resulted
into
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in
lack
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a lack
of social interaction skill in them.
Furthermore
, they start living a virtual life
instead
of reality which in long go effects them and their life
evily
morally objectionable behavior
evil
evilly
. To conclude, I believe that
internet
has some
drawbacks but
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drawbacks, but
if we handle it wisely it has more benefits to share with us and which can be proven to be more fruitful
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
we thought.
Submitted by Rajeshree Vaghela on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global connectivity
  • Information superhighway
  • Digital economy
  • Virtual communication
  • Cybersecurity
  • Online platforms
  • E-learning
  • Cloud computing
  • Remote access
  • Social networking sites
  • Digital footprint
  • Misinformation
  • Data privacy
  • E-commerce
  • Telecommuting
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