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Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum What to extend do you agree

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Physical
exercise
 is very important for children,
for
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since
 they are
feel
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feeling
 better.
people
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People
 believe that parent have
responsible
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responsibilities
 in
subject
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the subject
.I completely disagree With for two reasons. The parents do not allow their children sufficient free
time
 for leisure activities outside
school
.
Moreover
 the
school
 is responsible for Physical
exercise
.
Accept space
.
other
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Other
 people think
school
 should not misspend Valuable
time
 having sports. There are many
disadvantage
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disadvantages
, The parents do not allow their children sufficient free
time
 for leisure activities outside
school
.
Firstly
, many parents believe children Should pursue goals
,
Accept space
,
 for will benefit them in the future
.
Accept space
.
 Children
instead
 spending a Exercising
,
Accept space
,
 they can learn skills that are more practical in life.
Secondly
,
Accept space
,
parents think that children should not
exercise
 in the leisure activities, for they
can not
can not
cannot
 compete with other children
.
Accept space
.
 Should children study more, they will success in the future.
In addition
, the
school
 is responsible for Physical
exercise
.
Firstly
,
Accept space
,
 “Nowadays” children
spend
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spends
 a lot of
time
 in
school
.
Hence
,
Accept space
,
school
 can prepare children in all aspects.
for
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For
 example prepare them by putting curriculum
Such
 as Practical skills and physical
exercise
,
Accept space
,
So that they can enter the society.
Secondly
,
school
 by creating competition children promote physical
exercise
 Because children are motivated to
exercise
.
ON the other hand
,
Accept space
,
other people think
school
 should not misspend Valuable
time
 having sports, because
school
 is
place
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a place
the place
 to learn things like physics and chemistry and math
.
Accept space
.
 So They should not waste Their
time
 on Physical
Exercise
.
Accept space
.
I completely disagree with because
parent
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parents
 do not have enough
time
 their children to be
physical
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physically
exercise
.
Accept space
.
 Parents more prefer To provide facilities for their children
,
Accept space
,
 for children easily
achieve
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achievable
 for the goals.
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