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Some people think that children who spend a lot of time reading children s story books are wasting their time which could better used doing other more useful activities . To what extend do you agree

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To read
story
book
 at younger ages may not be helpful. A part of people think children should not spend a lot of time for they read
story
 books.I disagree with subject for two reasons.
children
Suggestion
Children
should reads
Suggestion
should read
story
book
 that
are
Suggestion
is
 suitable for their age.
Moreover
 Children Can read
variety
Suggestion
a variety
 of topics to gain experience
.
Accept space
.
Other people believe that children should do useful activities. There are many disadvantages.Children should read
story
book
 that
are
Suggestion
is
 suitable for their age
.
Accept space
.
Firstly
,
Accept space
,
 The writers of the
story
book
 choose topics that are appropriate for their age.
This
 leads parents feel better
.
Accept space
.
because
Suggestion
Because
 parents are confident children will not deflect.
Secondly
,
Accept space
,
 children are amused reading
story
book
 and
do not committed
Suggestion
do not commit
 a crime.
Moreover
 Children Can read
variety
Suggestion
a variety
 of topics to gain experience.If children read books on a variety of
topic
Suggestion
topics
,
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,
 they will get more information
.
Accept space
.
for
Suggestion
For
example children can
Suggestion
example, children can
 increase knowledge by choosing different books
such
 as sport and practical and scientific
.
Accept space
.
moreover they
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Moreover, they
Moreover they
 will effective for society
.
Accept space
.
On the other hand
, .
Accept space
, .
Other people believe that children should do useful activities.
Firstly
,
Accept space
,
 children should not stay At home.
This
also
 leads children have obesity.
children
Suggestion
Children
 should exercise
.
Accept space
.
Secondly
,
Accept space
,
 children
can not
can not
cannot
 acquire the necessary skills by reading a
books
Suggestion
book
.
in
Suggestion
In
addition children
Accept comma addition
addition, children
 need
too
in the direction of
to
 enter society so they can gain experience
.
Accept space
.
 At the end In my perspective children increase knowledge
by
Suggestion
of
 reading different books.
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