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Increase in fuel prices are the only way to reduce fuel consumption in the world. (Agree/Disagree)

Non renewable resources are limited and in great demand. Even the food prices have greatly increased over the
last
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 decade or two. Consumption of these
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fuel
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fuels
 will cause the resources to run out eventually. So the only way to decrease the management of resources is rising of the prices. Presently, people think that they are using it for now
,
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,
they do not think about the future. If we are going to waste our resources today
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then
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than
 what we are going to pass to our coming generations. Increasing prices of
fuel
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 will not only decrease the
management but
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management, but
also
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 put impact on people to use public transport.
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, a significant increase in prices would not only impact each individual but
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 a whole economy.
Fuel
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 prices are not linked to transport, but
also
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 to food production, home heating and entertainment. It seriously affects the standard of living of families with limited income and would mean the poor parts of society would become even poorer. As people feel the luxury of using cars and motorbikes
instead
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 of using public transport or simply by walking. In conclusion, while raising the
fuel
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 prices is one of the most commonly discussed solutions to
fuel
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 usage problems. It includes too many negative variables. Certainly, increasing
fuel
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 prices would create a small reduction of shipping usage, but far reaching effects would be unfair and unsustainable.

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