In some areas of the US,A curfew is imposed,in which Teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.what is your opinion about this .

Certain areas of the USA

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have forbidden

teenagers to go out during

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the night hours

if at all with the companion of an adult.In my

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opinion, this

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would be a good

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practice, though

many may argue that it is an intervention against the egalitarian right of an individual.

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of all adolescent considered to be the most complex period of

human growth cycle

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the human growth cycle

mentally and physically.

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, more

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attention

and care needed from family

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society and authorities.Teenagers could easily influenced by

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society, hence

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countries like the USA has certain law to protect them from bad influences or events from their social life.It is quintessential of how a country has taken care of their

citizen

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citizen, although

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few have

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an aversion

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concept. Fundamentally ,it is observed that countries like America has allowed to use licensed weapon unlike other countries ,

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, even teenagers are seemingly uses pistols extensively and many accident and killings occurred at schools and

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gang wars and drug dealing are prolifically part of American teenage lives compared to other developed countries.Subsequent in order to curb

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menace state force to implement curfews which restrict the teenager freedom of

movement especially

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movement, especially

at night time in some part of the country due to the

risks

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risk

factors concerned. Suffice

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any curfews or law implementation could cause some form of disruption, eventually it will be good for all especially things which are concerned

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with

teenagers and children.