some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

#people #choices

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globalised world

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we are

sorrounded

confined on all sides

surrounded

with plenty of options and

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completely agree with the above options.

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with entertainment

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this

particular sector flooded with lots of options.

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the fifth day of the week; the fourth working day

Thursdays

Tuesdays

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Many think that that will make people confuse and

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suffering severe physical strain or distress

stressed

.For instant

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entertainments app like Netflix

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Amazonprimeand Yuptv and

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so on

AS a

result people

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result, people

cannot stick to one and switching from one to another

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which cause

lot

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a lot

of stress and confusion. Another

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having or exercising influence or power

influential

area of choices is Electronic gadgets.There are several brands available in markets

nationaly

with regard to a nation taken as a whole

nationally

and

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throughout the world

internationally

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Options

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the basis

of various factors like price

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colour

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efficency

the ratio of the output to the input of any system

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trend and capacity.These features results in lots of

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clothing and

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so on

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the plethora

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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161 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

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overwhelmed
decision fatigue
paralysis by analysis
consumerism
globalization
personal autonomy
market saturation
option overload
decision-making process
psychological well-being
buyer's remorse
customization
trade-offs
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