Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students’ sports activities as they allocate to their libraries. Do you agree?

Some people believe that universities should give money to sports events, as they think sport events and
library
are the same. I cannot completely agree with
this
statement. In the following paragraph, I will give some points why I think the same. I was a student once, and I know the importance of libraries in
student’s life
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a student’s life
.
First
of all it is the cheapest way for any student to prepare themselves for the exams, for incoming lectures, for home works, to make research or just to read only books. From my point of view, it is important to supply
library
new relevant books, newspaper, magazines and journals.
Secondly
, libraries are the places, where students spend their most of the
time
in studying
also
some most of the students use
library
whenever there is no lecture in universities. So
library
must be large in area to accommodate
maximum number
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the maximum number
a maximum number
of students at a single
time
.
Also it
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Also, it
is essential there should be proper ventilation and proper lighting arrangement to be made so as
this
would be enable students to do their work properly. Another advantage of having good
library
is some of the
student
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students
cannot afford to have good computer or
good
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better
internet connection. These students use these
library
facilities to complete their work.
Also some
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Also, some
students cannot afford some of the expensive reference books which can be easily available in the
library
.
Hence
, to provide these all benefits, it is essential to have good facilities in
library
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the library
.
On the other hand
, students are less in
number who
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number, who
plays in sports events as
compare
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compared
to visiting
library
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the library
. Usually, students
first
go to college for graduation and
then
they focus on the sports activities.
However
, I must say that every university should have few playgrounds and a fitness
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
where students may have a rest after strained days. One more reason to have really good libraries is that it can save not only money but
time
for students. A person has not to drive to the bookstore to get
materials
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the materials
he or she is looking for. So, a
library
can save
time
that
then
can be spent on a sport. To conclude, I think libraries are the main resources of knowledge. So if universities have extra money, they should spend on buying new books, journals, magazines, new software and new equipment for
library
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the library
.
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