Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think people should be free to choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some believed that governments should
ban
dangerous sports, since these may influence other people and increase more health expenditure of society. While, the others think people have the right to choose for doing any kind
of sports.
There
many reasons why some people think the sports Suggestion
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such
as skiing, sky diving and other forms of dangerous sports should be banned. For starters, doing the these kind
of sports may not only hurt own self but influence other people. For instance
, children whose minds are not mature will learn other people's behaviors
and don't know to judge these. They may get hurt due to imitating the dangerous sports. manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
behaviour
Moreover
, these dangerous sports will increase health expenditure of society. Some may said
that the medical resources can be used on someone who really need these, not be used on the people who put themselves in Suggestion
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However
, the others may said
that everyone should be free to choose what Suggestion
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kind
of sports to do. Also
, it is unrealistic to ban
the dangerous sport. If a person want to jump into sea
to surfing, it is hard to imagine that how can police do to Suggestion
the sea
ban
it all the time. Meanwhile, it is hard to set the standard to
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for
in
definite
dangerous sports. Suggestion
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For instance
, there are many people riding bicycles for commuting everyday and it also
cause car accidents usually. Will cycling be count
as a dangerous sport? Most of people don't think so.
In conclusion, it seems that Suggestion
counted
ban
the dangerous sports may benefit our society, however
, it is unrealistic and people should have the right to choose what kind
of sports to do.Submitted by 莊曉薇 on
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