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Some people think that the only way to be successful in business is to have a unique product. Discuss if you agree or disagree and give your opinion

#people #business #product
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In today
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s competitive world
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in order to be prominent
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a business is required to be backed by a very unique and significant
product
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 or
idea
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.
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,
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,
unique
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 is the key
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however
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in my
opinion there
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opinion, there
 are certain other factors to be
considerd
carefully weighed
considered
 to transform the
idea
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to
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of
into
 a success story.These
factos
anything that contributes causally to a result
factors
 might include marketing
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quality
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 control
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customer care etc.I will elaborate my opinion in the following paragraph.
Firstly
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, any business innovation will be rewarded successfully
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if the company has a
professinoal
engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood
professional
quality
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 control department
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which makes sure the consistency of the standards of
product
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quality
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 all the times.Meaning that there must not be any compromise on
quality
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 of the
productas
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product as
 today's customer is smart enough to value the worth of a
product
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 for which he is paying money.
Secondly
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the post sale services must
also
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 be
considerd
carefully weighed
considered
consider
 to let the end user feel comfortable while using the
product
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Therefore
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,
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a dedicated team with
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product's
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the product's
a product's
 technical know how is
also
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 necessary in promoting a new
product
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 or
idea
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. Concluding all, I would suggest that any innovative
product
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 or
idea
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 must be launched efficiently and professionally
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by keeping in mind all the necessary business ingredients.
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