Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

while
Suggestion
While
I can see why people think adult life bring more joy than teenage years
,
Accept space
,
I strongly
beleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
teenager years
is
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are
the most wonderful time
in person's life
Suggestion
in a person's life
. For one thing,
this
is the time when
person
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a person
the person
persons
is full of
enery
(physics) a thermodynamic quantity equivalent to the capacity of a physical system to do work; the units of energy are joules or ergs
energy
and
ethusiam
the doctrine or belief that there is no God
atheism
. He feels like he can conquer the world in
this
thoughts
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thought
. Even though, there is study pressure in
this
phase of
life but
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life, but
the thought of achieving some goal nullifies the stress.
In other words
, I feel
hapiness
state of well-being characterized by emotions ranging from contentment to intense joy
happiness
is when you look forward to achieve something
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adolescence
  • fulfillment
  • responsibilities
  • exploration
  • long-term goals
  • sense of stability
  • carefree
  • contentment
  • well-being
  • life stage
  • unique opportunities
  • deep satisfaction
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