Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

people
Suggestion
People
have different viewpoints about whether should people put a stop to
climate
fluctuation or accept it.
while
Suggestion
While
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
accept that people should stop
climate
change
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would argue that people should
also
try to live with it
on
Suggestion
On
the one hand, there are numerous of reasons why the governments and individuals should prevent
climate
change
.
due
Suggestion
Due
to the rapidly natural disaster caused by the global warming, people might face a great number of difficulties.
for
Suggestion
For
instance, storms or droughts have negative impacts on crops.
this
Suggestion
This
might lead to
sufficiency
Suggestion
the sufficiency
of sustenance.
if
Suggestion
If
there are not any storms or droughts, crops would be intact and
therefore
there will not be lack of food.
additionally
Suggestion
Additionally
, rising temperatures
also has
Suggestion
also have
horrendus
causing fear or dread or terror
horrendous
infulences
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influences
on species.
since
Suggestion
Since
the temperature is becoming higher or lower, the extinction of worldwide species might occur.
for
Suggestion
For
example, polar bears might become
calsuaties
someone injured or killed or captured or missing in a military engagement
casualties
of
climate
change
due to lack of habitat, which is resulted from melting ice.
this
Suggestion
This
may lead to the disappearance of polar bears.
if
Suggestion
If
the temperature is persistent, the polar bears would not vanish
on
Suggestion
On
the other hand, individuals should
also
manage to live with the
climate
change
.
the
Suggestion
The
world is getting hotter or
colder which
Accept comma addition
colder, which
might improve our
adaption
the act of accepting with approval; favorable reception
adoption
adoptions
adaptation
.
for
Suggestion
For
example, living in
cold place
Suggestion
cold places
a cold place
such
as
russia
a former communist country in eastern Europe and northern Asia; established in 1922; included Russia and 14 other soviet socialist republics (Ukraine and Byelorussia and others); officially dissolved 31 December 1991
Russia
might boost our immune system.
this
Suggestion
This
might lead to a stronger and more flexible body.
since
Suggestion
Since
there is a rapid development of technology, people might evolve.
for
Suggestion
For
example, in the year of 3000, people might have a new form, a stronger, more powerful, intelligent, persistent than the old ones.
as
Suggestion
As
a result, people might have a longer life expectancy and have the competence to do everything that used to be out of their league
in
Suggestion
In
conclusion, coexistence between
climate
change
and humans appears reasonable.
in
Suggestion
In
addition, individuals and the government should
also
prevent the
climate
change
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