Junk/Street Food is the most affordable meal for the working class. But health problems due to rampant and uncontrolled consumption are being compounded. It has therefore become imperative for governments to impose a higher tax on them. To what extent do you agree to this arrangement by the government? Give your opinion.

While the severity and the number of health problem
has excessively amlified
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excessively amplified
has excessively amplified
owing to the consumption of unhealthy junk
food
, I totally disagree that levying the higher tax alone on these affordable foods will push them to adopting healthy eating habits. In
this
essay I will discuss the impact of
such
initiative by the government and alternate measures that would be more effective. To being with, in
this
urban
era
a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)
area
and fast pace life, people hardly get time for cooking.
Firstly
, due to the increased work pressure and competition in the work field, fast
food
is
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are
like blessings to them.
This
is not only a cheaper option but easy to available without compromising their working time.
As a result
, It assists in maintaining a work life balance.
Furthermore
, it is almost
next
to impossible
to
Suggestion
for
everyone to cook
helathy
having or indicating good health in body or mind; free from infirmity or disease
healthy
food
at home.
For example
, most bachelors working outside their home town, do not have the skill to cook at home.
Furthermore
, increasing the tax on
this
easy to
available
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avail
and cheaper
food
option will increase the
burdon
an onerous or difficult concern
burden
on the people.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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