One of your friends is interested in studying abroad but confused about which course to opt for. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter: Explain which course to choose. Explain why this course is best. Invite your friend to discuss in person.

Dear Smith, I hope
this
letter will find you in the pink of your health. I am glad to hear that you are interested in
coming
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Canada for studies and I know you are confused about which
course
to select. I am writing
this
letter to recommend you a
course
in Information Technology provided by Sun Microsystem. As you may be aware that Sun Microsystem is a software platform and their software programs are installed in almost every multinational company.
Moreover
, they
also
provide
placement
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guarantee after the
course
completion.
Therefore
, by enrolling in
this
course
you will have bright chances of working in a High tech organisation. As there
are
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vacation
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on vacation
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currently in Italy, I would like to invite you
at
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my place. Once you will be here I will provide
the
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detailed information about
this
course
. I believe
,
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I would be able to explain more about
this
course
once you will be here in person.
Also
, I will take you to beautiful and historic places
of
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this
city. Hope to see you soon Cheers!! Donald Trump
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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