Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems. What are these problems and how could they be reduced?

Watching movies is a free time activity. People watch movies to enjoy with their families. Some movies,
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give good message like how to develop personality, dressing trends,
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there are some movies which are causing serious social problems Our young generation loves to watch action movies, but it's seriously affecting our teenagers and children
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Young boys of high school are involved in fights. They are influenced by movies or video games. They use slang words which are used by their favourite celebrities in movies. We can
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see their rude and aggressive behaviour they even don't respect their elders. It can be reduced by applying some laws like children under 18 are not eligible for watching any action based movies. Even the directors don't have to use slang words or high level of violence, so that everyone is able to watch their movies. School authorities should keep an eye on children during their free time. Parents should know what their children are watching and if there is a change in their behaviour they should talk to them and tell them about their drawbacks. It's our foremost duty to protect our future generation
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • desensitization
  • empathy
  • aggressive behaviors
  • imitation
  • antisocial behavior
  • normalization
  • climate of fear
  • perceptions
  • mental health
  • aggression
  • emotional regulation
  • trauma-related symptoms
  • age ratings
  • critical viewing skills
  • nonviolent entertainment
  • film industry
  • regulate
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