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The
Impacts
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 of
globalization
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 on
tourism
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industry
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 in
Vietnam
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 Class: Academic writing Group: A3 Instructor: Mr. Nguyen Pham Duy Anh Le Trong Huu (ID: 16608) The Vietnamese-German University   The
impacts
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 of
globalization
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 on
tourism
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industry
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 in
Vietnam
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 Introduction
According to
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World
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 Bank,
Vietnam
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 is a developing country whose GDP growth has risen about more than 5% since 1990, with not small contribution of
tourism
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industry
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 register at 11.5 billion USD in 2014 and annual growth approximately 6% (Tổng cục Du Lịch, 2014). Go
along with
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 the
impacts
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 of
globalization
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, it will be a powerful push for
tourism
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industry
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in particular
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, for
Vietnam
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 in general.
This
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 essay will first propose definition of
globalization
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 and
then
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 discuss in-depth how
globalization
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 has affected
tourism
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. Definition The terms “
Globalization
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” can be known as the reinforcement integration in terms of economies, politic, culture and society, and civilizations.
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, international relations have been simplified and gone beyond.
Globalization
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 is a process which
impacts
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 majority aspects of human life: from political corporation, capital flows to personal opinions. It is
also
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 related to environmental issue, criminal behavior, heath, and, terrorism. Travel and
tourism
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 are one of the causes and results of
globalization
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 processes. (Hjalager, 2007) The
tourism
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industry
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,
also
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 known as the travel
industry
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, is traveling activities to other destination, either domestically or internationally, for social, leisure, or business purposes. It closely related to the hospitality
industry
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, the hotel
industry
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 and the logistic
industry
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, and its target is achieved the customers satisfied by responding or serving demands that they need during their holiday. A Brief Overview of
Vietnam
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Vietnam
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 has great potential to make
tourism
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 become a strong
industry
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 because
Vietnam
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 located in the central of Southeast Asia, with a coastline length of more than 3,260 km along the water with forest trees green and scenic grandeur.
Vietnam
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 Nam boasts over 125 beaches and in the list of 12 countries leading to the bay the most beautiful in the
world
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 (Ministry of Foreign Affairs
Vietnam
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, 2018) and more than 3,000 scenic and historic sites listed as heritage countries. Up to 2019,
Vietnam
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 has eight ‘
World
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 Heritage’ (UNESCO, 2020) and thirteen ‘Intangible Cultural Heritages’ (UNESCO, 2020) that was recognized by UNESCO (United Nations Educational, Scientific and Cultural Organization). How
globalization
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 effect on
tourism
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industry
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? 1.Positive effect Following the
impacts
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 of
globalization
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, the series of agreement and organization had been signed and joint by
Vietnam
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 government
such
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 as ASEAN( Association of Southeast Asian Nation), WTO(
World
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 Trade Organization), EVFTA (European Union
Vietnam
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 Free Trade Agreement), CPTPP( the Comprehensive and Progressive Trans-Pacific Partnership) has been contributed to impulse economic and society in general,
tourism
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in particular
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. Thereby, it facilitates to enhance global mobility.
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 means that “
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” has made easier to travel around the
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. There are several cheaper flights which was offered, multi-companies are opening offices everywhere. Thanks to e-banking and international bank, the transactions and payments have been safely accomplished by single click of mouse. In 2017,
Vietnam
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 have 79 luxury hotels had just opened, among
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 register 10 five-star luxury hotel which added 101,400 rooms and increased 10% year by year (Atkinson, 2017). Quang Nam is one of provinces outstanding with attract FDI ( Foreign Direct Investment) , following statistic, up to 2018, there was 45 projects in tourists and services with capital investment about 4,5 billion USD and accounting for 81% FDI investment (Anh, 2018). In 2018,
Vietnam
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 welcomed 15,497,791 international visitors, an increase of 19.9% compared to 2017 and income in
tourism
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 have followed the growth of two-digit since 2009, peaked at 80,6% in 2013 and obtained 289.84 billion VND (
Vietnam
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 National Administration of
Tourism
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, 2018).

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