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In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowalage . In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications

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Some people think that having practical skills is vital rather than obtaining an academic
degree
 nowadays and employees may not need any academic
degree
 in the future. I party
disagree
Suggestion
disagrees
 with
this
 assertion. On the one hand, having
parctical
concerned with actual use or practice
practical
 skills is very essential for
job
 markets
nowaday
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
 because the
persentage
a proportion in relation to a whole (which is usually the amount per hundred)
percentage
percentages
 of productive work can be
incrased
made greater in size or amount or degree
increased
 by
skillful
 workers.
Moreover
, most of people will not spend
thire
of them or themselves
their
 time on studying for years, if employers do not ask academic qualifications. In spite of the arguments above, I disagree that employees may not need any formal
degree
 in the future since I believe that well-known companies not only practical skills but
also
 an academic qualification require.
That is
way
the cause or intention underlying an action or situation, especially in the phrase 'the whys and wherefores'
why
 people
also
 need to apply for formal
dagrees
a position on a scale of intensity or amount or quality
degrees
 and
leran
gain knowledge or skills
learn
 theoretical knowledge in order to get a good
job
.
In addition
, if
job
 applicants have academic qualifications, they can get a lot of opportunities like promotion and earning a higher salary. By the way, employers value education over experience in vocational fields In conclusion,
although
 some people agreed that
job
 applicants may not need any academic
degree
 in the future, I think that employers will require formal qualifications
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