Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people with a better education. Do you agree or disagree.

Well behaviour people are very important and most valuable thing
to
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for
a
country
.In my view every
country
in the world
have
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has
different categories of people.
some
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Some
people are good some people are bad and majority of them are middleweight of the good and bad. Any period of time the majority good that
country
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the country
is very peaceful and it’s strong with the economy
also
.
Lot
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A lot
of countries use the prison for bad peoples who are doing the
crime
.
That is
the common way to solve the
crime
cases in the
country
.
some
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Some
people are saying better education can
changing
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change
the people and it is reducing the
crime
frequency of a
country
.In my opinion is education can’t totally change those
crime
cases. Because
lot
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a lot
of well educated white
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collar
collared
job holders doing
lot
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a lot
lots
of
crime
in
hole
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the hole
a hole
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ect
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well educated guys. Following that details we can’t fully agree
to
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with
this
statement. Education can change the mind of the people. In that case not only education can change the
crime
cases, people need equality
,
Accept space
,
good social environment
,
Accept space
,
good
in come
the financial gain (earned or unearned) accruing over a given period of time
income
.
Accept space
.
Any
country
can maintain
this
main
categories
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category
with developing the humanities, I think we can reduce the
crime
cases. We can’t stop the criminals in a
country
, it’s happening any time in any place. It’s the nature of a social system. If some
crime
is happen
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happens
,
best solution
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the best solution
is the prison. He or she
done
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has done
did
a
crime
, consequence is very disastrous, it is the prison.
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