Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement

It is an ongoing debate topic from all parts

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society that whether, women are better than men when they take care of their

children

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children, hence

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that would be their primary concern rather than

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a career

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thoroughly disagree with

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statement due to the financial independence is much need in the modern economic terms of any part the world

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hence

leaving

career

just for looking after the children would not be an ideal option. Predominantly

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it is observed that women are better than men when compared to nurture their babies

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Since, mothers are benevolent in nature and carrying their baby's prenatal they are more affectionate towards their

child

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having said that, many new studies prove that the determining factor of love hormones exotoxin realising at the same level for

both

mother and father

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we cannot say that only mothers are affectionate to their

child

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in

this

contemporary era,

both

men and women are

career

driven due to the financial needs and

also

women are far more educated than previous decades

hence

they cannot just leave the

career

to look after the babies.

Moreover

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both

men and women are getting paternity and maternity paid leaves respectively to look after the

child

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As a result

, it would not be a problem for

both

parents to take care their

child

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child, hence

hence

this

tendency could act as a catalyst for empowering women and

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is chiefly significant in

this

era.To elucidate

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, in many developed countries,

both

the parent taking responsibility to look after the

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child, hence the

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the standard of living is high compared to the women who living in the country common mentality has an aversion to the

career

enthusiasts women. In conclusion,

Although

many argue that women need to leave the job for

child

care since they are quintessential as mothers than father

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in my opinion, it would not be a good practise to leave the

career

since the world needs more participation from women and especially it is vital to empower the women to thrive in

this

modern day.