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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

#rubbish #government #amount
Environment
Suggestion
Environmental
 concern is
increasing in day
Suggestion
increasing day
 to day life because of garbage we
colecting
the act of gathering something together
collecting
eceryday
found in the ordinary course of events
everyday
. Human consumption is increasing
repidly
with rapid movements
rapidly
 result in more rubbish.
This
 essay will discuss about what are the reason to
happening
Suggestion
happen
 and what government can do you reduce
amount
Suggestion
the amount
 of rubbish produce
everyday
Suggestion
every day
.
Firstly
, Human is using more plastic products
anf
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
 bags because it
is look
Suggestion
looks
 stylish
abf
at a higher position than
above
 easy to use.
Pvc
Suggestion
PVC
 is taking
thousand years
Suggestion
a thousand years
 to dispose into
evvironment
Suggestion
an environment
environment
the environment
environments
 that mean less disposable more garbage
moreever
in addition
moreover
 industrial product
are mostly made
Suggestion
is mostly made
 of plastic
like cold drink
Suggestion
like a cold drink
 bottles which looks stylish but not easy to recycle. Major cities are addressing garbage problem concern.
Government
Suggestion
The government
 should impose strict law and regulation on using
such
 items.
Doong
Suggestion
Doing
Thong
 public
awarness
having knowledge of
awareness
 camp and encourage people who doing great work to keep
environment
Suggestion
the environment
 clean and
nity
clean or organized
neat
.
Whoch
Suggestion
Which
 will help to motivate other peoples. I think
this
 is
time
Suggestion
the time
 to call world leaders and important decision on current ethics. To Conclude, increase use of
environment
Suggestion
environmentally
 friendly product and government strict rules can lead to
reuce
any competition
race
reduce
 rubbish. Promote public
awarness
having knowledge of
awareness
 by celebrity and
famouls
widely known and esteemed
famous
 people help to encourage more peoples.
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