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The availability of entertainment such as video games on handheld devices are harmful to individuals and to the society they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In
this
 era, many people entertain themselves by playing games on mobiles as these Smartphones have taken place over television and computer, which is somehow harmful to them and their society. I believe that situation is serious.
First
 and foremost, children under a certain age should not be spending more
time
 on Smart phones, especially for playing games most the
time
 it affects their studies and
also
 it is a wastage of
time
.
Although
 games are good for killing the
time
 or enjoy in leisure
time
 but kids always learn from their gathering or society so simultaneously it is harming the society they residing in.
Besides
 that, parents should encourage their offspring for sports, outdoor games or Provide them alternative place or opportunities for enjoyment as it is
also
 necessary along with studies. Extension to, studies or games are damaging their health and effecting them in various ways. Nowadays farm houses, playground and amusement parks are a great source of the entertainment and by
Time
 spent with younger ones will help in improving physical health. They will not only enjoy, but
also
 it will good for their mental health.
Furthermore
, parents should limit the
time
 for kids to play games, sports, and study as well as teaching
time
 management will assist them in the future. They should keep an eye what kind of games children are playing. Parental communication in a friendly way can help to judge kids easily. To conclude, in
this
 modern
time
 smartphone is necessary like other things in life, playing a game can be harmful to them and their community but parents always looks after their offspring.
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