Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects.Other people think that, in today's world, subject like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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I BELIEVE EVERY
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IS SIGNIFICANT IN TODAY'S LIFE WATHER IT IS A
HISTORY
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OR
SCIENCE
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AND TECHNOLOGY. CERTAIN FOLKS ARGUE THAT
SCIENCE
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AND TECHNOLOGY IS MORE ESSENTIAL RATHER THAN FOCUSING ON
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KNOWLEDGE
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. WHEREASTHE REST OF THE INDIVIDUALS THINKS THAT
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SHOULD HAVE BASIC
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OF
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.
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ESSAY WOULD DISCUSS HOW KNOWING
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BENEFICIAL FOR THE
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AND WHY IT IS IMKPORTANT TO HAVE THE
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OF
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AND TECH AS WELL. ON THE
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HAND,
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OF
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HELPS A
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TO BE A GOOD MEMBER OF THE SOCIETY. WHEN AN INDIVIDUAL KNOWS ABOUT THE
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'S NATION'S
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, HE CAN FIND THE SOLUTION OF HIS PRESENT MENACE.
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, ACCRODING TO THE INDIAN CULTURAL SECTION, 80% OF THE INDIAN CIVILIAN FIND SUITABLE SOLUTION FROM REFEREING BACK TO THE HISTIRY OF INDIA
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AS HOW WE GOT FREEOM BROM BRITISH PEOPLE AND KNOW THE WORTH OF BEING A HUMAN.
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,
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A
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AND TECHNOLOGY HELPS A
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TO SURVIVE IN
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FAST PACE WORLD. AS TECHNOLOGY DEVELOPS, COMPETITION INCREASE AND TO MATCH THE SHOULDER WITH THE CURRENT INFORMATION.
ONE
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HAS TO KNOW THE SCEINECE AND TECH THROUGLY.
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, AS PER THE OXFORD UNIVERSITY STUDENTS SURVEY, 60% THE FOLKS RELY ON THE
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AND TECHNOLOGY FOR FINANCIAL AND EMMOTIONAL SURVIVAL
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AS TO MANAGE THE DISTANT RELATIONSHIP REQUIRES A
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OF SMART PHONE TO KEEP IN TOUCH WITHE LOVED ONES. IN CONCLUSION, AFTER THE ABOVE DISCUSSION, BOTH THE
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INDEED ASSIST A
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IN ANYWAYS.
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, IT SHOULD BE THE PERSONAL CHOICE TO SELECT THE
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AS PER THE ENTHUSIASM BECAUSE WITHOUT THE INTEREST
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CAN FAIL IN THE LIFE EXAM. SO, IT IS ESSENTIAL TO KNOW BOTH THE
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VERY WELL.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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