Parents of obese children should be punished for making them fat? Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that there should have punishments issued for parents who let their kids gain too many weighs.

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essay disagrees with

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statement because children inherit gene from their parents and parents have

wrong belief

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the wrong belief

that fat kids are stronger and healthier.

Children’s body

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The child’s body

Child’s body

A child’s body

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weighs

are affected by their parents’ old-fashioned concept. Weigh is a measurement to determine physical health; so if any children appear to be chubby, other adults will consider them to be healthier than thin ones. These kids are forced to eat more than necessary or fed too much high-fat food

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. Most of these moms and dads think that normal-weight child is a sign of poor parenting. A recent study found that 70% of parents who have obese children admitted that they have

fatten

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fattened

their kids for having good health. Genetic conditions are one of the most common causes of making the young generations

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. When family members cannot escape from them, it is obvious and understandable that no matter how hard moms and dads are attempting to adjust their kids’ daily intake, even to reduce a large amount of food

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consumed

; their disappointing weight still remains unchanged. Exercising serves as an effective way to get rid of those excessive

calories which

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special family-gene circumstance. A recent research concluded that certain genetic traits run in family explaining why it takes longer to burn up calories. In conclusion, parents should not take any sanctions as their children get obese. The reasons are that they possess genes which involve in body weighs and parent’s misunderstanding of being weighty is healthier.