Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. Discuss both views

Getting a well-paid

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has become easier in recent years due to the emergence of new professions

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, while some believe that graduating a tertiary education can ensure having

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a good

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, I agree with those who feel that gaining

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experience immediately after school could bring more advantages. On the one hand, it could be argued that having a

university

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diploma could guarantee getting a lucrative

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. Those who support that a person who has graduated a

university

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say that, he or she is able to become a competitive candidate to get a

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from

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particular organizations

a particular organization

the particular organization

as employers are commonly accept people who have had

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an education background

which was specialized to specific sphere

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, people who have completed a

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are said to be able to predict a setback of their future actions in workplace situations which makes them more likely to be employed owing to the fact that not every company is ready to educate their

employers

a worker who is hired to perform a job

employees

and give them a chance to learn from their mistakes.

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, I believe that there are more arguments to suggest that starting working after school could be better. One issue is that

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students are mainly taught theory. Due to

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students

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student

often could not use their the theoretical knowledge in practice which give rise to the problem of being not capable of implementing a given task in the

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work place

a place where work is done

workplace

. Even worse, there could be changes in

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the decision

of a student who was already applied to a

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to change his future

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career but

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career, but

he or she has already spent more than 4 years there. It

could be seem

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could seem

to be a waste of time to have a tertiary education if a student does not know which

career

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path suits him. In comparison, an individual who started working after school had an opportunity to try

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a diversity

of jobs and gain

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experience with creating a base of his future

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which would be the best to him. In conclusion,

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it could be possible to have a good

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after completing a

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, on balance, I believe that gaining

work

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experience earlier could raise the chance to have a better

career

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path.