Video games are very popular with children. However, some parents feel that video games can have a negative impact on their children, but others believe that they may have some positive effects. How do you feel about children playing video games? Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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Video games, those kids play on devices mostly have negative impacts rather than positive on
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health and mental development. Even though it makes
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, some parent thinks these device games could be beneficial for their kids,
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, making new friends, building leadership, knowledge of technology, keeps them away from the wrong environment. I would ask them, have you ever notice those games and kids who play virtual games regularly? Suspicious word Is
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research shows that video games can promote a negative effect on a
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's development both mentally and physically, especially in aspects of violence, anti-social tendencies or behaviour, aggressive thoughts and feelings and social isolation. It
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develops adult thoughts among children because adult features are being shown in many kids games.
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have been given to being violent. Many kids had killed themselves while playing the game named "BlUE WHALE", and others did many obnoxious activities with their family members because of that game. Shooting, kicking, stabbing and punching are the main features of some video games.
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kids developing that behaviour in their real life. It
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affects our
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's academic achievements. As a mother of one
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, my opinion is, we can build those previously mentioned skills in our
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without providing them video games. Parents need to give more time and monitor their kids' activity. We should involve them in real social life
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of virtual life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Educational games
  • Cognitive development
  • Strategic thinking
  • Hand-eye coordination
  • Time management
  • Social skills
  • Teamwork
  • Multiplayer
  • Creativity
  • Imagination
  • Role-playing games (RPGs)
  • Physical activity
  • Inappropriate content
  • Addictive behavior
  • Parental control
  • Balanced lifestyle
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