You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

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Johnson, I am writing to request leave for 3 weeks for completing an advanced marketing course. In our field, one is expected to be excellent at communication and management skills. Though I possess these characteristics, I believe that I need to enhance them, especially in the advanced marketing course the focus is not only on the

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they have designed the contents suitable for today's technological world. In order to be able to get a certificate in advanced marketing. I request you to kindly grant me leave from 5th to 22nd July. During

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period, when I am off-duty, I will be in the institution working on the projects that are assigned to me with great concentration. After the successful certification, I will be fully equipped to manage the current trends in business. If given opportunities, with gained knowledge, I will conduct workshops for my colleagues for improving the sales and management of documents required in our company. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely,

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Komal Seeta

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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