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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays.

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It is irrefutable that
music
 has changed our life considerably.
Music
 helps us relax and rest by forgiving all our needs in life. Some people prefer their traditional
music
, others like international
music
. Most people opine that traditional
music
 of a country essential than the international one. In
this
 essay I shall discuss both views and give my own opinion.
To begin
 with, I can say that
music
 has taken very important role in our life. Nowadays, we are listening
music
 everywhere, when we drive to work, when we do our daily works at home. Admittedly, we need
music
 for entertainment
also
.
For example
, we go to
night clubs
a spot that is open late at night and that provides entertainment (as singers or dancers) as well as dancing and food and drink
nightclubs
 where very boring without
music
.
Also
, our weddings or other holidays would be too tedious if we do not have any
music
.
Furthermore
, we should put a question, which
music
 is important for us? Our traditional
music
 or international
music
 which is spread and listened with curiosity everywhere.
Firstly
, there are a majority of dances with traditional
music
. And these dances are more lovely and beautiful than modern international dances.
However
, our young prefer international because it is needed for clubs, other important parties
also
.
Secondly
, listening
music
that is
 sung in other international language is very lovely and enjoyable. Everyone enjoys from it. And
international
Suggestion
the international music
music
 takes place in trend rapidly than traditional. So, we can see that
traditional
Suggestion
the traditional music
music
 of a country is less needed day to day. In conclusion, I want to say international
music
 is
important
Suggestion
more important
 than
traditional
Suggestion
tradition
, because there are no needs in traditional
music
 in our modern era.
Submitted by Aziza on

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