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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn new. However, other believe that they can learn new better through other medias.

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There has always been a considerable discussion in terms of the most effective way of learning
news
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the news
. It is argued by some people that newspapers are the best way to get ourselves up to date, I believe that we can equip ourselves with the information around the world faster through other
medias
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
mediums
. There are several reasons why people think it is better to use newspapers as a source of news.
Firstly
, Newspapers have appeared for a long time. Back in the day newspapers are the only source that people can get the news from. It has become a staple when talking about news so it’s really hard to replace newspapers with something else.
Secondly
, the cost
for
Suggestion
of
 newspapers are reasonable so that people can subscribe to a lot of newspapers and enrich themselves with the information around the globe without breaking the bank. Despite those above argument, I believe that there do exist many different ways to approach to the news these days. In light of the advancement of
technology we
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technology, we
 are able to learn about the news with just a click.
This
 is perfectly exemplified by a high proportion of people have access to the internet. Through the internet we can find more and more articles about what we are
interest
Suggestion
interested
 in without spending a penny. In the past it was impossible to get ourselves informed right immediately.
However
, nowadays with just a simple action as a click we can broaden our horizon about what happened around us. In conclusion, traditional newspapers are a good way to
learns
Suggestion
learn
 news, but I believe that with the assistance of technology we can learn new even better.
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