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Some people believe that all children should have a pet or an animal to look after. Other people disagree, however, saying that this depends on a child’s circumstances. Consider these opposing views and give your own opinion

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Nowadays, many people argue that taking care of animals at home have a huge
perks
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perk
 and advantages for children. Whereas, some of them thinks that
this
 idea is not acceptable for many parents and determined by child’s condition. In
this
 essay I will look at both
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sides
 of the argument and give my opinion. On the one side, there can be many benefits regarding to keeping pets for children. One of the most important reason is that it can significantly help to improve cognitive development. During
this
 period, animals may help to increase the physical and emotional skills of the
children
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children, such
such
 as sense of responsibility and are interested in stand up and walk in order to follow pets and play with them.
For instance
, many research studies indicate that children who had pets in their childhood may develop a relationship with their peers easily in
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comparison
comparing
comparisons
compared
 with other children.
On the other hand
, some of the people believe that keeping animals for youngsters who have not suitable condition is not a perfect idea. Many young children have allergies and some of these animals can carry a lot of disease – causing bacteria and virus that may quite dangerous to children.
In addition
, due to the increase cost of living in many countries, taking care of animals may bring a lot of
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paying
 for families who have low income. In conclusion,
although
 there
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is
 a lot of argument about looking after pets
such
 as cause illness and paying lots of money, I believe that have an animal as a pet can impact positively to child psychology.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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