some peoples believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientist research, business and the academic world. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable o be shared freely. discuss both these views and give your opinion.
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believes
information
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essay will discuss both sides of the information
in detail and provide evidence as to why information
is valuable and dangerous assest
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a useful or valuable quality
asset
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foremost
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share
those informations
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, most of businussman
sharing a person engaged in commercial or industrial business (especially an owner or executive)
businessman
informations
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information
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Google. It can be (postpositive) however
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to the students, who find more financial assistance in time of need
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benefits
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and it will be a useful or valuable quality
asset
assets
protect
individuals and companies.
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belive
that accept as true; take to be true
believes
believe
believed
informtion
is too a message received and understood
information
importatnt
to be of great significance or value
important
sgared
freely. Because have in common; held or experienced in common
shared
sharering
too much unselfishly willing to share with others
sharing
information
about resaerch
, manufacturing and bombs, it will be harmful to the systematic investigation to establish facts
research
world
. As the result can build up terriost
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informations
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enhance
threat
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most of competitors looking and they are already to Suggestion
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essay discuss
the reasons why Suggestion
discusses
informations
sharing free, good and bad sides to the related parties. In my opinion, a message received and understood
information
information
is extremly
important for the to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect
extremely
world
to share
knowledge
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
there
related parties. But it is must be protected that sensitive of them or themselves
their
informations
a message received and understood
information
relevent
companies and individuals and the country. People must be having a bearing on or connection with the subject at issue
relevant
understant
to their know and comprehend the nature or meaning of
understand
knowledge
is not be understimate
assign too low a value to
underestimated
with
those. Suggestion
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