Write an essay about the advantages of studying abroad
Our world is improving better and better day by day. Technologies are growing at a rapid rate.The demanding for labour is now increasing.
Likewise
, education
is an
vital need for children of all ages in order to provide the best human resource. Suggestion
a
Hence
, this
leads to an arguement
on whether kids should go studying abroad or not studying abroad. Today essay will help a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true
argument
higlighting
all the advantages of go Suggestion
to highlight
highlighting
studing
abroad.
On the reading carefully with intent to remember
studying
first
hand, there is no deny
that going study abroad is really beneficial, for both the kids as well as their country. They will not Suggestion
denying
ony
have a chance to experience new and nothing more
only
things but
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things, but
also
a great opportunity to learn more about the technology industries and many other facilities of the other countries. Therefor, they can come back and acknowlege
their declare to be true or admit the existence or reality or truth of
acknowledge
citizenes
with new techniques, though to improve their our country in a native or naturalized member of a state or other political community
citizens
such
a better way. Moreover
, going study abroad is also
a perfect choice for many rich famillies
to let their children to have the most suitable living and studying conditions. In fact, many surveys have recently pointed out that living in the absolutely new culture since a very young age can a social unit living together
families
enale
render capable or able for some task
enable
kid
to deeply emerge into their new homes, Suggestion
kids
a kid
hence
to improve their fluency in one language and change their own tones and accents. Additionally
, studying abroad is also
seemed to be a choice for many families who are living in countries with bad education
system, such
as Afganshitan
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Afghanistan
,
South Africa, etc. Those arrivals Accept space
,
are tend
to be foreign country with the best Suggestion
tend
education
system, well equiped
schools and good provided or fitted out with what is necessary or useful or appropriate
equipped
commitee
.They believe that it will help their children a special group delegated to consider some matter
committee
in
Suggestion
with
schoolong
, and later, their job as the kids will be taught by the best professors. Along with the act of teaching at school
schooling
that many
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that, many
cultural
diverse countries, especially those which are located in the south of America are witnessing a great Suggestion
culturally
raise
in the number of foreign students. Many a growth in strength or number or importance
rise
schoolarships
from the top 10 most famous financial aid provided to a student on the basis of academic merit
scholarships
scholarship
university
have been given to many students from different countries, usually those with bad Suggestion
universities
education
system.Needlesstosay
, the trend of studying abroad is now becoming one of the hottest topic
for everyone. Many scientists have already described Suggestion
topics
this
trend as predictable and costly due to the fact that the tuition fees are rather higher than the total amount of money that a normal family could earn.Though there are many opposed opinions toward this
new trend but
in overall, studying abroad still gets a better position Accept comma addition
trend, but
on
the race.
TO conclude, I think that Suggestion
in
although
studying abroad may be pricy and unaffordable
, and even merely impossible to avoid or evade
unavoidable
imposible
for many not capable of occurring or being accomplished or dealt with
impossible
implausible
family
, but the advantages really outshine the disadvantages. Suggestion
families
Hence
, you should fight hare and get your self
a chance to reflexive form of "you"
yourself
studying
abroad. I'm sure you won't regret.Suggestion
study
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion