An increasing number of people choose to live in big cities. What the problems will this bring about? Should the government encourage people to live in small town?

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The glamour of the urban lifestyle has attracted innumerable pupils to settle in there.
Although
, it is obvious for the human to keep uplifting themselves.
However
, the consequences of
such
a problem are many to deal with, like scarcity of land, the rise in population and
also
reduction in farming as well as
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not worth considering
paltry
. The responsible authority should understand these
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hawks
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and persuade people from changing their home. The immediate difficulty faced, would be of the living. They will have finance to find their suitable living, but there must be space to find one.
Then
, due to lack of affordable dwellings and not able to afford over-priced apartments. They lay themselves on the busy streets of the cities and eventually become the part of
beggers'
a person who keeps and updates a blog
bloggers
bigger
community.
For example
, in Mumbai, thousands of pupils used to travel there for making their life either as a Bollywood actor or as a businessman. But how many of them really stand the chance and what about the rest, who eventually put an end to their lives or return to the hometown with a disappointment. Another, factor to look forward is the rise in population.
This
will cause many hurdles, all the facilities like train, tram, bus and many more will be divided and will be difficult to cope up with
such
everyday competition.
For example
, the everyday life of Bombay pupils, each morning they wake up early to catch up for the train. Eventually, their office hours rise from six to eight because two hours are for the journey to the destination.
However
there
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There
will
also
be
increase
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increased
in the pollution and traffic scandals due to more of private vehicles on the road. As an illustration, hours of waiting at the traffic signals of
maharastra
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Maharastra
and
banglore
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Banglore
.
However
, there will not only be hurdles to cope up in the city, but
also
there will be a reduction in the agricultural activities. Which will lead to gross reduction between demand and supply. The
polutary
not worth considering
paltry
practise where mulching the cattle and taking good care of them in return for eggs and milk will
also
be endangered. In conclusion, it will be a challenging for the government to decide the step to take. Even though the population living in the rural area can be facilitated with Urbanic amenities. So, that they do not leave their home, in order to settle in a metro city, neither they get attracted by the hustle and bustle of the city.
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