University Students must pay all tuition fees, because it benefits mostly them individually, rather than the society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

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There has been a constant discussion as to the party (
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) that should be responsible for the University’s tuition.
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most people believe that the college significantly benefit the students
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of the entire community, others think that the
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should pay these fees.
This
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essay explains why payment of tertiary tuition should be a joint responsibility of both parties – students and
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. It is a known fact that there can no monumental progress or development without the innovative ideas that are
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generated by university students and graduates.
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of the
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positive impact of these ideas, most countries have started to sign into law tertiary education grants for all students as a financial support for the students.
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, Kenya has recently signed into statute educational subsidy for all students following the world-class software and device developed by the students in the University of Kampe to track all cars in the country.
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the opinion that both parties stand to benefit from the learning outcome.
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, there is no doubt that
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a college education
can be quite expensive. As a matter of fact, most students do not have the financial capacity to support themselves due to one uncontrollable factor and another. According to the global educational report published my
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, 65% of students in the institution of higher learning struggle to pay their fees. It
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stated that 45% of most graduates in the
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2 decades have
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loans to settle after graduation.
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validate that the
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tuition, financial
burden should not be completely on the students. In conclusion, while it might be tempting to hastily think that it’s only the students that reap the reward of their learning without any impact on the
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, no community has ever developed and would ever develop beyond its educational system most especially its tertiary education.
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, both parties should jointly share the fees responsibility.
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