You have recently landed in a foreign country on work visa and interested in seeking information guide about the place in and around the city. Write a letter to the relocation assistance provider for seeing help and in your letter. Write why you are writing the letter. what kind of information you want. how and when you can get requested information.

Dear Sir,
First
of all, thank you very much for
provided
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me
such
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an excellent job opportunity. I am writing
this
letter to seek assistance from you. As you already know that
this
is my
first
on-site opportunity in India so could you please provide me
further
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insights about the place.
Firstly
, I would like to know about the public transportation system, which will help me in commuting from home to
office
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.
In addition
, I am interested to know about the historical places so that I can explore the tradition and culture of
this
beautiful country during my weekends. I request you to please take
this
as
priority
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subject. Can you please confirm the preferred mode of correspondence how and when I can get
this
information? Would it be either through email or telephone
call
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? Do let me know, I can text you my local telephone number. Looking forward
for
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your response. Yours sincerely, Tyler Locke
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