Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many local languages are in
phase
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a phase
the phase
of extinction because of lacking communication. Some people may argue that governments should allocate budget on necessary issues while others think it is important to keep them alive;
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, I believe they have their own importance and should consider them as valuable matter. In the
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place, minority languages are usually used by low population local speakers, often the history which is behind them is precious and keeps many interesting myths alive,
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several enthusiast people are eager to know about these kind of historical stories and
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like to talk with people who speak by
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language, gradually the appropriate situation will be created for improving tourism industry. Tourists bring
money
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themselves and
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is a good way for governments that spend
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money
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on saving minority languages,
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moreover I
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moreover, I
believe these languages are the past of many
nations and
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nations, and
they recognize and know their descendants
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with
of
them so governments should consider some laws for keeping the languages. In the
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place, some other people believe public social matters must be priority for governments. They think
public budget
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the public budget
should use for some subjects like health, public transport and education, in their view
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contemporary society needs them more than low widespread languages.
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addition their
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addition, their
attitude is the modern world requires
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common language and people should communicate with each others all around the globe by that,
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spending public
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to avoid
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the disappearance
of local languages is wasting
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. In
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, these less-widely languages should not lose their importance, they are valuable as other matters and in some cases can should help governments and nations to have
income
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an income
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