You ordered an equipment online. However, when you received, it was damaged. Send a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, you should tell:giving the details about the equipmentexplain the damagesuggest what you want the manager to do.

Dear Sir/Madam I recently ordered a Panasonic blender from your online shop. Unfortunately, I was disappointed when I discovered that the glass portions of the device had been broken during transit. I would have expected the package to be wrapped more carefully in order to avoid incidents
such
as
this
. Since
this
appliance was intended to be as a gift for an occasion that has passed, I would like you to arrange for the return of the blender and to process a full refund of my money as soon as is possible. If you need to connect with me, you can contact me at
this
email address: [email protected]
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sincerely Atefeh Hosseiny
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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