In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In some countries, some people believe that it is more essential to spend a large budget on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. While others think that money should be allocated to improving public

transport

. In my opinion, I believe that it is

pivotally

kept private or confined to those intimately concerned

privately

important in

this

era to spend money on mass rapid trains for commuting between cities rather than improving public

transport

.

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Building, the

construction for rapid trains benefits citizens a lot in terms of time efficiency. People are being forced to work in big cities due to less employment in their hometown. Many people are living in a suburban city while their work is in the capital city.

For instance

, the average time people spent on commuting is usually 3-4 hours. By the existence of rapid trains would be able to reduce the time spend on getting their office. On the one hand, the users’ safety

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of

the existing public

transport

should be concerned. Many old public means of

transport

still

exist but

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exist, but

both the private owner and the government do not take care of the condition of it to gain a lot of profit. They have a less maintaining budget. Nowadays, it is a common thing to hear bad news on public transportation due to

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the not

-so-well in maintaining the machines. Traffic jams

also was

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also were

a result of

this

problem. People often drive with their vehicles to get their

office resulting

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office, resulting

in traffic in many locations in peak hours. To sum up, I think it is better to spend more budget on the development of very fast trains between cities due to minimizing the traffic.