Some governments spend a lot of money on exploring space. Some feel that this investment is justified while others think that money should be spent on public services like healthcare and education. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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modern era,

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government

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the government

spends a large amount of budget on

space

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exploration.

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it is asserted by few that

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government

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the government

should invest in exploring

space

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, but others believe that

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government’s budget

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the government’s budget

must be utilized for

public’s basic requirement

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the public’s basic requirement

public’s basic requirements

. Both the views have

merits

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merit

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essay will demonstrate with my viewpoint. I believe that

government

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should spend money for providing the basic needs of the people rather than using it for exploring other planets. Each and every human being requires food, shelter, water to stay alive. Apart from

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government

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should

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realize people

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need good education, which is their fundamental requirement and

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of using extra funds on

space

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exploration they could utilize it for introducing healthcare facilities to keep the populace healthy and fit.

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, the USA

government

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spent its large amount of budget on NASA for exploring

space

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for

more than 20 years

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of spending it on providing basic amenities to the citizen.

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, scientists can get to know more about our planet while

space

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exploration. Viewing earth from galaxy provides scientist the big picture of

atmosphere

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the atmosphere

rather than depending on micro information.

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, the issue of ozone layer depletion in the atmosphere

further

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causing global warming was detected while exploring

galaxy

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the galaxy

. Apart from

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universe

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the universe

is a vast place and contains a lot of comets, asteroids which could dangerous for earth. So exploring

space

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can help to locate these hazards in advance. To conclude,

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exploring

space

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can help to detect danger in advance, yet

fulfillment

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the fulfilment

fulfilment

basic requirements

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the basic requirements

of basic amenities for

public

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the public

is necessary.

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, in my

viewpoint it

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viewpoint, it

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government’s foremost responsibility

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the government’s foremost responsibility

a government’s foremost responsibility

to introduce educational and healthcare facilities.

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Topic Vocabulary:

technological advancements
potential solutions
climate monitoring
disaster prediction
satellite communication
fostering international cooperation
improving the quality of life
reducing poverty
addressing immediate societal needs
allocating funds
advancements in space technology
long-term benefits
robust public services
partnerships with private companies
cost-sharing
preparing for future challenges
resource scarcity
present-day issues
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