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We have a mixture of people from different cultures and ethnic groups in a country. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, many people from different countries and races live together. Both the advantages and disadvantages of
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 social situation will be looked at, examples and analysis will be provided below. There are several benefits of a mixture nation that people from
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various cultural
 backgrounds.
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 and foremost, people who live in multicultural society could learn from others, which means that they have more opportunities to experience other people’s unique things
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 as
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, lifestyle and the way of thinking.
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, we will find
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 much easier to learn a
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language
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 if children live with foreign neighbours or classmates
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 of studying in courses, because they could talk with native speakers to get the core of
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language
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.
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, living with people from diverse states will enable us to become more understanding and tolerant. I mean people won’t be too judged to unfamiliar things as they can access to different customs and beliefs in different cultures easily.
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, there are
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 some drawbacks may caused by multiracial community.
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 with, some people may lose their capabilities of their ethnic like native
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 or traditional customs. The reason is that the international
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 is English, so most of people need to communicate with others in English. Case in point, a lot of young Asians who have emigrated to western countries can’t use their mother tongue fluently, even don’t know the history of their own country.
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, If people insist on their own way of doing things and refuse to respect other cultures, there will be conflicts between people. In conclusion, the advantages of a multicultural society outweigh its disadvantages.
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 it does bring some problems,
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 a society still would surely be better for stability and peace in the world.

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