International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?
International tourism
sytems
instrumentality that combines interrelated interacting artifacts designed to work as a coherent entity
systems
stems
has been
Suggestion
have been
benefical
for many locations while its promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
influense
on citizens a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influence
lifes
and a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
environmet
at all were noted Suggestion
the environment
environment
alo
using the voice; not silently
aloud
also
.
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drawbacks
of Suggestion
drawback
this
system being as much objective as possible
It's clear thast
tourism at most brings large profits pointing out something
that
for
many less developed countries with big and Suggestion
in
interinsting
history because these countries have many places to visit but problems with supplying population at the same time.They try to attract as many tourists as possible and arousing or holding the attention
interesting
consequently
become popular among toursits
.someone who travels for pleasure
tourists
This
method is indeed helpful for less developed countries.However other countries
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However, other countries
also
make profit by this
method without rich historical places but
thanks to their name.Accept comma addition
places, but
These countries like
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These countries, like
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,
France or Japan Accept space
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poplular
because of their well improved economics regarded with great favor, approval, or affection especially by the general public
popular
, ,
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,
,
widespred
among widely circulated or diffused
widespread
people
cultureSuggestion
peoples'
,
language and influence which they have on Accept space
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whole world
and Suggestion
the whole world
thus
its a main reason of succes
in terms of attracting tourists.But these places which can provide for an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
tourists only historical heritage
of their ancestors or some amusement Suggestion
the tourists only historical heritage
cant
make their citizens can not
can't
lifes
bettera characteristic state or mode of living
lives
,
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,
main role
of Suggestion
the main role
impoving
inhabitants getting higher or more vigorous
improving
lifes
is playing economics and reliable president who can fully change the a characteristic state or mode of living
life
situatuon
in the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
situation
situations
station
country
when it the situation seems Suggestion
the country
a country
countries
incorrigable
.
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it's
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whole country or make enviro
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an environment
environment
the environment
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